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heres some of my best stuff in my opinion

Dreadful Dragons dragging still bodies
Fear sum with the knack to kill as a hobbie
bloodshot eyes shades of mahogany
many sharp swords of agony occupy their mandible
stained with blood like the hands of hannibal
Cannibals bow before these animals
And no man dares to approach their aerial
fright
no warrior or knight
can defeat them even after a fortnight(14 days)
the seven sins of man brought to the light
is the only thing that can lower their might
but attack now and see how you fair
well no inclination, Stairwells
lets admit the faults in our cells
and send the dragon back from were they came
......HELL

i fly through vortex's because of my asthma
i always idolized ionized plasma
similar to gas but cant get an ass full
when your so high its hard to be bashful
beyond skies feeling at one with the colossals
stars go boww supernova, Nova Scocia
aurora lights singing is all i can hope for
munchin on meteorites likes its kosher
gazing at consolations,filled with elation
thinking these are the origins of life
from these you can read the past challegese and strife
of our greek brethren
history written by the heavens
I see myself in stars between leo and libra
in girth i outshine all but hydra
although physically i have past the point of go
im a virgin in the mind ergo im virgo

when my conscious is confined
corruption fills my mind
catastrophic actions take place in time
my sensible cornea becomes so blind
an i calmly become a creation of calamity
everything be comes unfamiliar even family
im so chill but this hidden anger submerges me
im going super sayain slicing through suckers and anything burdens me
slowly sealing my fate giving up to the anger
so silly how the pure spirited become the most danger
us meaning me and me are mentaly mustering up power to gain control
but until the match is done i remain a brainless monster with no soul
meddlin middle aged men try to stop me, careless
but this adolescent monster cant be managed
Really i rarely fall into the state
but when i do run away from the rain clouds trade
im rangilng mangling rodgers retina
and ripping through him wearing his skin as a rya
on your tombstone R.i.P is read
really suitable since you are in pieces
......DEAD